Tuesday, January 4, 2011

Marriage

The slightest crack
within the solid foundation
so narrow it can
hardly be seen
but upon closer
look you see
the slight crack is causing
the foundation to crumble

17 Tasty Tidbits:

Drake Sigar said...

Luckily I have plenty of chewing gum and sticky tape on hand.

ib said...
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ib said...

It is no coincidence that this was the first post that my eyes would see this morning. Thank you Becca. I pray that this finds you well.

Thisisme said...

I do hope that your foundations aren't crumbling, Becca!

ib said...

I second Thisisme's concern.

Novie ♥ said...

Love this one, always Becca. I hope you are doing fine. I missed you. :)

Bouncin' Barb said...

And sometimes no amount of cement can put the foundation back together again.

Jumble Mash said...

Very well written. Thanks for sharing, Becca.

becca said...

@drake yay my hero

@ib i'm doing very well thank you

@thisisme mine is very solid no worries

@novie missed you too and all is good

@bouncin barb so true

@jumble mash thank you

Retired English Teacher said...

Wow. Well said.

Copyboy said...

So true. So true.

Lynne H. said...

So fill that crack with love and understanding...
Great poem Becca!!!

caterpillar said...

I agree....

Wally J said...

When the foundation cracks, you need to shore it up... sometimes with expert assistance. This I saw as my wife and I enter year # 19.

bruce said...

nOice!

i got nothing to add!

amazing...

Bruce
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becca said...

@retired english teacher thank you

@capybot
@lynne H
@caterpillar
@wally j
@Bruce thank you

Pat Tillett said...

The engraving on the inside of the ring isn't a romantic passage of some type, it's the pre-nup...

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