Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Then and Now



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THEN
you were wanted
you were special
you were loved

THEN
i begged
i cried
I screamed

NOW
You are lost
You are gone
You are a memory

NOW
I regret
I question
I hurt


35 Tasty Tidbits:

Toto said...

nice one! like the idea and the whole thing!

http://all-around-toto.blogspot.com/

Oilfield Trash said...

I like this one. And I often feel like that myself.

Thisisme. said...

Good poem Becca. Has a real nostalgic feel to it.

David Allen Waters said...

this is so powerful, as someone who has been there done that...it tugs at my heart.

Jewels said...

great poem Becca! I don't think there is anyone out there who can't relate to that.

thenitefalls said...

This poem makes me feel the experience of loosing a loved one. Beautiful :)

Bubbles said...

sad

Laynee said...

Totally can relate to this poem. Damn it. Now I need a tissue. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful poem.

Pat Tillett said...

Very nice! I felt because I've lived it...

lovebloggin said...

great poem! keep them coming

Blessings, Joanne said...

Great poem, reminds me of all those broken hearts I had in my younger years. Blessings, Joanne

ib said...

An unfortunate reality that is part of life, I guess. I have felt this way on occasion. Wonderful as always.

Bouncin' Barb said...

That is a great poem. Hugs.

becca said...

@toto thank you

@oilfield trash thank you

@thisisme thank you

@David allen Waters hugs

@Jewels thank you

@thenitefalls it came from an experience something like that

@bubbles :(

@Laynee hands you the tissues

@Pat Tillett hugs

@lovebloggin as along as the words come i will

@Joanne hugs

@Ib thank you

@Bouncin Barb hugs to you

bruce said...

powerful!

you have such a gift for bring out emotions!

caterpillar said...

In a few words, you have written volumes about the conflicting emotions...nice...

Copyboy said...

Ooo interesting format. Very original.

Jimmy said...

Been there done that too Becca, very nice my Friend.

The Empress said...

Lovely poem and a great reminder to live life without regrets.

Chris said...

So sad sounding :(

The Frisky Virgin said...

This is beautiful. :)

Zakk said...

very powerful.

Brooke said...

very nice!!

Mrs. Hyde said...

I've known that feeling and hopefully I won't ever have to feel it again. Good job.

Laughing Vault said...

sad poem, but i like it

G said...

sad poem...

Hilary said...

We can all relate to those feelings.

sildude said...

too emo for my tastes.

Nick said...

great poem I think everyone here can relate to that, thank becca

Pearson Report said...

Very powerful.
Thought provoking.

Nice piece,
Jenny

Freek said...

A poem about someone who passed away?
Very serene, I like it.

Rachel said...

so beautiful.

Houston A.W. Knight said...

I love "Then and Now" I can so feel this poem.

Hawk

becca said...

@bruce thank you

@caterpillar thank you

@copyboy thank you i try

@Jimmy thank you

@The empress thank you and that is very true

@Chris yes but sometimes life is sad

@The frisky virgin thank you

@Zakk thank you

brooke thank you

@Mrs. Hyde hugs

@laughing vault thsnk you

@G yes it is

@Hi;ary so true

@sildude thank you for stopping by

@Nick thank you

@pearson report thank you

@Freek sort of glad you liked it

@Rachel thank you

@Houston A.W. knight thank you

Eyre said...

Love it!

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