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it was me
i did it
i didn't want to
but i did
i begged
i pleaded
No one answered
Abandoned
Alone
one word
the fraction of time
it takes for a heart to stop beating
blood drips from my hands
guilt eats at my conscience
sorrow tears at my heart
i did it
it was me
I'm the monster
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leaves goose bumps on my skin.
I shot the sheriff
But I didn't shoot no deputy.
im sad :(:(
there is a monster in me too. i feed it with pills ;)
What gives? m.
Best lil monster there is!
wow, becca my friend...this one is much deeper than it appears on the surface....well done
This is a bit scary, but great none the less.
See Kanye? You don't need muppets to write about monsters and be effective.
THIS is how you do it.
very well said...
we all have our demons..
Yes, this one is a bit scary, Becca. Good to see some of your poetry again though.
I don't know how you meant that but I understood it in my life. My heart hurts when I read it.
oh no!
I saw the word blood and my immediately screamed: Edward Cullen!...sorry Becca, I'm a little obsessed is all.
This was fantastic! You're a poetic genius.
A very intense poem I can feel grimness
really haunting imagery
This was a good poem.
wow - sad
...great poem
Creepy and comic book worthy.
great one!
ooooo I just got a chill! Becca you are so talented! Blessings, Joanne
@Adam that's a good thing right?
@Drake Sigar good to know
@Laughing Vault :(
@Nick wish pills could earse this hugs
@Mark it's a long story
@Jason Shaw aw thanks sweetie hugs
@David Allen Waters thank you
@bouncin barb thank you and sorry it scared you
@Lost,in.Idaho thank you
@bruce yes we do
@Thisisme aw thank you i've missed writing it
@KaLynn ("MiMi") sorry to hear that hugs
@bubbles it's ok
@Sandra thank you and be obesses baby i adore anything vampire
@thenitefalls thank you
@BTN Hip Hop thank you
@oilfield trash thank you
@G thank you
@Copyboy woohoo comics
@Schla.mp3 thank you
@Joanne thank you
Heartache or Murder? Or murder of your heart? I think we all have a little monster in us, regardless of what kind. How to cope with said monster is a different story.
Ava
Wow becca, that was powerful...
Powerful and piercing.
There's a bit of a monster in all of us.
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